Wednesday, October 27, 2010
My Blurb
Malcolm faces problems and situations off and on the court. He has to deal living in Queens Bridge and choose if he is going to keep up what he doing or do what he loves. He has to make a choice fast because if he doesn’t he will not have to choose the street is going to choose for him.
Tuesday, October 26, 2010
Story Mountain
The main character is Malcolm and he lives in Queens Bridge and the beginning of the story is Malcolm playing basketball for is school team and just wrapping up the game with 41 points, 11 assist, and 7 rebounds with the score is 110 to 59. He saw his friend that became a drug dealer. Malcolm is playing basketball and trying to go to the college and get out the projects. He started to hang out with the wrong people and doing the stuff he stopped. He realized that he going nowhere if he keeps doing what he doing. He has to choice the street life or education and his future.
Tuesday, October 12, 2010
Independent reading fiction story
I heard Ms. Ryan’s voice in my head: “You need help, kid”
As the kid in the back of the class don’t say anything when people bother him as he sitting in his chair they making fun of him because he is skinny everybody is bigger than him. He gets bully and has to give up his lunch money to the bully. The bully named was James and bigger than Jason, he took Jason money and pushed him around in the hallway for the 2 years. Jason told the teachers and his parents about him getting bully by James. Nobody did anything to stop it.
As Jason coming to his English class with his books in one hand and his lunch in other hand. James took his lunch and pushed him on the ground as he fell and Ms. Ryan ran to Jason and ask him,
“Are you ok?” Jason answered,
“Yea” Ms. Ryan said,
“What Happened to you” Ms. Ryan said with a concerned look on her face,
“Nothing” he shouts as he running away
Jason stayed in the bathroom till it was time to leave from school. He ran home he went straight to his room and slam the door and went to his bed and started to cry. Jason tried eating more than usual eat for but nothing happened to him.
His father came in the room when he noticed that he didn’t come in the kitchen to get his cookies and milk.
His father went in to room with a concerned look on his face as he asked,
“What happen in school today?” Jason smashed is headed in the pillow with anger the same as when he first went to the school.
Jason’s father called the school to see what happen and why he was crying and Ms. Ryan picked up the phone.
“I was wondered why my son Jason was crying?”
“He is getting bully and we should have a meeting but Jason is not going to talk about it”
I’m come to the school tomorrow for the meeting”
“Ok”
Jason walked to school early and tried to avoid the bully and his dad follows him to school to see who’s messing with his son. Jason hides beyond a car before James seemed him. The dad realized that he was getting by James. The father knows the James’s mother they is cousins but James and Jason doesn’t know that. He called his mother and setup a meeting to see why James and Jason are not getting along.
James and Jason were in the kitchen by their trying to talk. James was looking to find something to eat and Jason was scared to talk to him because he always takes his lunch money.
Jason asked James,
“Why you always pushing me and taking my lunch everyday?”
James replied,
“I don’t know I guess because you don’t do anything to defeat yourself when people pick on you”
James tried to take his grandmother sweater that she made for him before she died. Jason told James when he was trying to take the sweater,
“Don’t take my sweater, it’s mine”
Jason punched James in the face and James ran to his mother and said Jason hit him.
The next day Jason saw James and he said,
“I’m sorry for being a bully to you these years”
Jason was happy that he didn’t have any more problems with nobody else.
As the kid in the back of the class don’t say anything when people bother him as he sitting in his chair they making fun of him because he is skinny everybody is bigger than him. He gets bully and has to give up his lunch money to the bully. The bully named was James and bigger than Jason, he took Jason money and pushed him around in the hallway for the 2 years. Jason told the teachers and his parents about him getting bully by James. Nobody did anything to stop it.
As Jason coming to his English class with his books in one hand and his lunch in other hand. James took his lunch and pushed him on the ground as he fell and Ms. Ryan ran to Jason and ask him,
“Are you ok?” Jason answered,
“Yea” Ms. Ryan said,
“What Happened to you” Ms. Ryan said with a concerned look on her face,
“Nothing” he shouts as he running away
Jason stayed in the bathroom till it was time to leave from school. He ran home he went straight to his room and slam the door and went to his bed and started to cry. Jason tried eating more than usual eat for but nothing happened to him.
His father came in the room when he noticed that he didn’t come in the kitchen to get his cookies and milk.
His father went in to room with a concerned look on his face as he asked,
“What happen in school today?” Jason smashed is headed in the pillow with anger the same as when he first went to the school.
Jason’s father called the school to see what happen and why he was crying and Ms. Ryan picked up the phone.
“I was wondered why my son Jason was crying?”
“He is getting bully and we should have a meeting but Jason is not going to talk about it”
I’m come to the school tomorrow for the meeting”
“Ok”
Jason walked to school early and tried to avoid the bully and his dad follows him to school to see who’s messing with his son. Jason hides beyond a car before James seemed him. The dad realized that he was getting by James. The father knows the James’s mother they is cousins but James and Jason doesn’t know that. He called his mother and setup a meeting to see why James and Jason are not getting along.
James and Jason were in the kitchen by their trying to talk. James was looking to find something to eat and Jason was scared to talk to him because he always takes his lunch money.
Jason asked James,
“Why you always pushing me and taking my lunch everyday?”
James replied,
“I don’t know I guess because you don’t do anything to defeat yourself when people pick on you”
James tried to take his grandmother sweater that she made for him before she died. Jason told James when he was trying to take the sweater,
“Don’t take my sweater, it’s mine”
Jason punched James in the face and James ran to his mother and said Jason hit him.
The next day Jason saw James and he said,
“I’m sorry for being a bully to you these years”
Jason was happy that he didn’t have any more problems with nobody else.
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